เขียน Diary ภาษาอังกฤษ ช่วยแก้ให้ด้วยครับ

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01-14-2014 is today.
I woke up at 6.00 am ,as usual. I took a bath,washed my face and brushed my teeth. I put T-shirt in that it is my favorite shirt.
I am done in 6.30 am and then i prepared my food and ate it until 7.30 pm. It was time to go to bus stop. While I walked along the house , i was seeing a squarel but i was postponing it. I kept walking to bus stop and waited until the yellow bus picked me up to school. I came to school at 7.55 am.i went to the gym cuz my first period is P.E. . It is one of my favorite subject. I studied this subject normally but if had a something new was I did not play sport today cuz i gonna testing tomorrow so today i supposed to practice a review for the most ready testing tomorrow. i was done first period at 9.45 am. Then,i went to second period sociology .I greeted my friends like every day . I started studying like every day. It was boring for me. In 11.00 am biology class started , Today i had rat lab . i dissected the rat .i saw every part of the rat except penis .lol(it is female rat)
i got out from the classroom at 01.45 pm to cafeteria. i ate Mexican food Nachos .After that it is also my favorite class,Math.
At the moment is 10.00 pm. i am lazy to write anymore See you. Thanks for attention.I hope u ll help me to make it perfect.
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