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Topic: The long-term effects of unemployment on a person
In present, 60% of people are always unemployment, which have many causes why do those people are still not to get any work. It may be because they choose work or those works are not appropriate with their ability and many reasons. Unemployment is one big problem of social. It also affects to economic of that country. There are many the long-term effects of unemployment on a person, which are laziness, poverty, and less experience.
The first significant a long-term effect of unemployment is laziness. Due to familiar with unemployment situation of them, it affects to those people may be laziness. Some people are in unemployment situation for many years, so they may don’t know what they should do after getting a job.
Another long-term effect of unemployment is poverty. Absolutely, when people are not work; as a result, they don’t have enough money to spend anything. Job gives money to people to exchange with their ability. If people don’t have work, they won’t have money to do everything. In example, suppose people want a mobile to communicate with their parents, yet they don’t have work it means they don’t have money too, so this is difficulty situation for people who are unemployed.
In addition, another important long-term effect of unemployment is less experience. Someone is in unemployment situation, whereas most people are working, those people will have more chance than people who are in unemployment situation because those people have experience working better than unemployed; moreover, many companies also want a new worker to have much experience to join with their company.
There are many effects of long-time unemployment, which are laziness, poverty, and less experience. These effects will affect to people in the future in various problem, so they should find other works while they don’t get any work or wait for acceptance job. They may interview at many companies to be a choice for them to get some job.
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Topic: The long-term effects of unemployment on a person
In present, 60% of people are always unemployment, which have many causes why do those people are still not to get any work. It may be because they choose work or those works are not appropriate with their ability and many reasons. Unemployment is one big problem of social. It also affects to economic of that country. There are many the long-term effects of unemployment on a person, which are laziness, poverty, and less experience.
The first significant a long-term effect of unemployment is laziness. Due to familiar with unemployment situation of them, it affects to those people may be laziness. Some people are in unemployment situation for many years, so they may don’t know what they should do after getting a job.
Another long-term effect of unemployment is poverty. Absolutely, when people are not work; as a result, they don’t have enough money to spend anything. Job gives money to people to exchange with their ability. If people don’t have work, they won’t have money to do everything. In example, suppose people want a mobile to communicate with their parents, yet they don’t have work it means they don’t have money too, so this is difficulty situation for people who are unemployed.
In addition, another important long-term effect of unemployment is less experience. Someone is in unemployment situation, whereas most people are working, those people will have more chance than people who are in unemployment situation because those people have experience working better than unemployed; moreover, many companies also want a new worker to have much experience to join with their company.
There are many effects of long-time unemployment, which are laziness, poverty, and less experience. These effects will affect to people in the future in various problem, so they should find other works while they don’t get any work or wait for acceptance job. They may interview at many companies to be a choice for them to get some job.