ทำ Opinion Paragraph เเต่ไม่รู้สรุปยังไงดี ช่วยต่อหน่อยค่ะ จะทำเป็นเเนวทาง ทำไปส่งรอบนึงเเล้วเค้าบอกว่าสรุปผิดให้เอามาเเก้ เลยตันไปเลยค่ะ TT เรื่อง Violence on TV causing increase in violence among children and teenagers.
In my opinion, violence on TV causes increase in violence among children and teenagers. Firstly, children cannot tell the difference between reality and imaginary. The people in the stories are make believe. They are actors and the story is not true. Young children are unable to realize that when a character attacks someone is not real and should not be imitated. Think about it, many young children still believe in the Afro Samurai, Freezing, and Spider man. How can children tell the difference between real violence and the make-believe violence done with a script for television? Secondly, television creates heroes out of the people who commit the crimes. Kids feel that if they copy the criminal they will be a hero, too. Children begin to think of criminals as powerful role models. For example, Superman fight with Hulk. In conclusion,
ทำ Opinion Paragraph เเต่ไม่รู้สรุปยังไงดี ช่วยต่อหน่อยค่ะ จะทำเป็นเเนวทาง
In my opinion, violence on TV causes increase in violence among children and teenagers. Firstly, children cannot tell the difference between reality and imaginary. The people in the stories are make believe. They are actors and the story is not true. Young children are unable to realize that when a character attacks someone is not real and should not be imitated. Think about it, many young children still believe in the Afro Samurai, Freezing, and Spider man. How can children tell the difference between real violence and the make-believe violence done with a script for television? Secondly, television creates heroes out of the people who commit the crimes. Kids feel that if they copy the criminal they will be a hero, too. Children begin to think of criminals as powerful role models. For example, Superman fight with Hulk. In conclusion,