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Subject: Asking for Prices and Samples


Dear Sirs,

We are interested in your product which I saw in Alibaba.com, XXXXXXX, Model Number: XD001, Specification: 16cm Height, layer: 60.

We require samples in your best prices of it. The quantity are 5000 Packs.

We should be much obliged, if your quotation and samples for as soon as possible and send us your product by UPS or DHL.

We are looking forwards to hearing from you earliest convenience.


Best regards,
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