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ขอบคุณจ้าา
The Different Fascination
I would not strongly ask my classmates to peruse the CNN online news that I just acquired knowledge from as my hobbit. The main reasons include personal interest, specific knowledge and its quality.
Firstly, this AEP class is not a specific faculty in the university that student seek to admissions and have common interests. Therefore our classmates theoretically have different interests in terms of educational field. I’m fascinated by the world news that always employs formal words and tough phrase verbs as well as having only tense information spurring the reader’s headache. I am quite certain my friend will never love them. However I am not meaning that I am better than my friends but for me, the global news sparks my joy at getting the fresh information and scanning for a new word I’ve never known before.
Secondly, the said information in Thailand is specific to those who belong to one of exclusive groups of Thai people such as in financial and diplomatic careers especially among the aged. They could readily understand the news with news’s backgrounds they have accumulated for many years. Although the tough words in the news could make me in trouble and puzzled, dictionaries and my background knowledge are sufficient to help me comprehend the content right away.
Lastly, CNN news is an American press agency that is one of the celebrated new agencies in the world that broadcast live global news worldwide. Despite this reputation, its contents, in my opinion, regularly sound exaggerated resulted to decrease of the number of its followers gradually. Besides, its webpage management is not appropriate for news agency’s first page as the first page contains diversity of small news headlines and looks complicated. There has been a lot of fresh news emerging around the clock. They should focus on only just-coming news that most of their readers want to acquire with gigantic picture and place it at the top of their agenda, in common with the BBC news.
In addition, its written style does not meet the need of Thai readers. There is a lot of slang and some words are not clear or ponderous. So it is too difficult to understand.
To conclude, I think that the CNN news is not a recommended reading material source not only for my classmates but also for Thai adult who do not really want to read them for specific purpose.
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ขอบคุณจ้าา
The Different Fascination
I would not strongly ask my classmates to peruse the CNN online news that I just acquired knowledge from as my hobbit. The main reasons include personal interest, specific knowledge and its quality.
Firstly, this AEP class is not a specific faculty in the university that student seek to admissions and have common interests. Therefore our classmates theoretically have different interests in terms of educational field. I’m fascinated by the world news that always employs formal words and tough phrase verbs as well as having only tense information spurring the reader’s headache. I am quite certain my friend will never love them. However I am not meaning that I am better than my friends but for me, the global news sparks my joy at getting the fresh information and scanning for a new word I’ve never known before.
Secondly, the said information in Thailand is specific to those who belong to one of exclusive groups of Thai people such as in financial and diplomatic careers especially among the aged. They could readily understand the news with news’s backgrounds they have accumulated for many years. Although the tough words in the news could make me in trouble and puzzled, dictionaries and my background knowledge are sufficient to help me comprehend the content right away.
Lastly, CNN news is an American press agency that is one of the celebrated new agencies in the world that broadcast live global news worldwide. Despite this reputation, its contents, in my opinion, regularly sound exaggerated resulted to decrease of the number of its followers gradually. Besides, its webpage management is not appropriate for news agency’s first page as the first page contains diversity of small news headlines and looks complicated. There has been a lot of fresh news emerging around the clock. They should focus on only just-coming news that most of their readers want to acquire with gigantic picture and place it at the top of their agenda, in common with the BBC news.
In addition, its written style does not meet the need of Thai readers. There is a lot of slang and some words are not clear or ponderous. So it is too difficult to understand.
To conclude, I think that the CNN news is not a recommended reading material source not only for my classmates but also for Thai adult who do not really want to read them for specific purpose.