ใครเก่งeng ช่วยทีคะ personal essay

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In general, the first thing that people are getting to know each other. Everyone has to start by introducing themselves so that others know and understand themselves. It will bring to good friendship. So, I decide to write about my personal narrative.
           My name is _________. I was born on the __th of January in 1994, which means I’m 19 years old now. My father is a soldier and mother is accountant. I have sister ages 16. They made me happy the most whenever I am with them. I have been living and studying in Bangkok untill I was in 6th class (12 years old), then I moved to Nakornpathom with my family. I finished off my high school at _________School and got choose as a student at ________. I love going to university and I have always taken my studies very seriously. I have never said to anyone in my life, that 'I hate studies'. I have got big dreams, since I was 16 years old; I decided to be a teacher. So that is my goal and I always try to aim to do my best at school, so hopefully that if I studied hard, I would succeed.  I don't really know why I decided to be a teacher. I just love children. Although I do feel very annoyed whenever I see the children crying, but in fact that we have got school to teach children is a great thing. Whenever I see children, who I think need knowledge or help, I am always willing to help them.

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